Peter and I met up for about an hour to discuss the edits I made on draft 1 of "The Witch Queen and the Steamer Trunk".
I suggested that there be more hints that Gordon Lark was in love with Robert. Also, since there is such a heavy emphasis of the witch and magic elements of the story, it would strengthen the ending if the Witch Queen says something to Robert after his discovers the truth. It would make for a nice concluding scene.
I expressed my concern about what type of literary magazine would be most appropriate for this type of writing. Peter agreed that it may be more difficult to find a place of submission for this story.
Overall, it was a very accomplished meeting.
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